Here is the first rough cut of the trailer.
Notes from feedback:
- I am going to change the 'brightly lit scenes' to black and white in order to create a more atmospheric mood. This should also give a clearer contrast between the scenes, which will solve any confusion between them.
- I am going to replace the train shot with something that appears within the conversation scene (perhaps the drug), so this transition will run much more smoothly.
- I will alter the shot length / timing of the voiceover to sync the audio and visual together.
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